Saturday, November 15, 2008

honors



The Revolutionary war was fought for the revolution of the new American people who once belonged to Brittan. The civil war was between the people who once fought for the same revolution but now wanted different resolutions to how America was ran The connection between the two is actually easy to uncover each war wanted a revolution of some kind, one side with an advantage and another destined to lose.
England had the advantage of being an established country and military. America defeated them in the name of freedom, even though they would no longer be the "United States" When America began the civil war the north had the upper hand when it came to every resource except for the number of cotton produced and this was because of slavery. The unions population was 2.5 larger, they had railroads, and 10 times the industrial Capacity.
The south feared that the "Black Republicans" would rise and "undermine" the souths leaders and political powers over their superiors. While the North worried that slavery would be spread to the free states mostly in the North. Because of Industrialization the south started to fall apart because bringing the industrial world to the south wasn't successful. Neither was agriculture. The souths economy depended on slaves. The south needed its own revolution so that they could live like wanted to and be independent from the north. Just as America did from the British.
This war only not only had things in common but it almost was a part 2 of the revolutionary war because the people still weren't happy.

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dear randy, i know i have not met your requirements and for that i take full responsibility i didn't work on this as much as i could have and for that i apologize. But don't give up on me sir, i will make you proud with my editorial...or at least i will try. -Ashley

p.s. this wasn't really late but my computer was freezing so then i finally got it to work and my mom didn't pay our cable bill so our internet got cut off uuuugh the economy sucks when your a poverty stricken black girl. ugh i hope you don't mark me down for this last paragraph being unprofessional. Please don't i just wanted to let you know, that i disappointed myself and i said i would try harder and i did but not my best.

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